Beer

A poem by Ally The Cat

Beer makes you fat.

Is that bad?

TV said so. 

Telly is a twat but getting funnier i'll give it that.

The adverts make me laugh as I sit here all day lazy as a cat..

...watching movies wasting away indoors.

Bored.

Beer makes it better.

Reviews

[closed]

you have a broad array of topics you like to discourse upon

not always one to take yourself too seriously in terms of your writing style, it seems


an amusing write


-Dream

[Tinotenda Nyevedzanai]

thank you :) glad it made you smile

[Playing with Demons]

I love the rhyme :) this is a funny playful poem that I really did enjoy! I do happen to like beer...nice write!

[Tinotenda Nyevedzanai]

Thank you very much :)

[wordman]

especially when it`s Michelob ultra light

[beautiful dreamer]

very candid very free. but beer isn't my cup of tea lol. oh i couldn't pass up a rhyme opportunity. i like the flow of this and how you just opened your mind to your readers. great job!

[Tinotenda Nyevedzanai]

Haha I like what you did there very smooth.

[beautiful dreamer]

didnt even meant it at first! lol

[JC]

ha, this is real and refreshing...like beer.

[Tinotenda Nyevedzanai]

Haha thanks yes I may make it's sequel... "Wine."

[JC]

I'll drink to that.