Criminal Cat

Poem - ATC

Home detention

For a fat cat's like heaven

Too lazy to go out and about

A collar round my ankle 

So classy so meow

So everybody must now bring things to me

If I say they're allowed

Or I'll get my claws out

As I'm a breaking bad criminal kitty cat. 

Reviews

[Terrence Chang]

Lol Cats. I love the way you have described cats. Meow Meows to you

[Coyote Poetry]

I enjoyed the poem. Cats can be entertaining. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[SuspectGray]

Made me smile...the fat cat with the ankle monitor.... a serial mouse killer no doubt

[Tinotenda Nyevedzanai]

Ha love it thanks

[Emily]

Nice short poem!
Vary well written!
Keep it up!

[Tinotenda Nyevedzanai]

Cheers Emily :) means a lot!

[R Smith]

Those cat's huh, i bet they would love to be grounded as long as the food keeps coming and the beds are warm, lovely poem Ally, you write so beautifully :)

[Tinotenda Nyevedzanai]

Thank you Richard for such kind words :) It means a lot you taking the time to leave a review and I'm really pleased you enjoyed the piece.

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

This poem has real character. :)
I like the writing style.

[Tinotenda Nyevedzanai]

Haha what cat doesn't have style? Thanks - ATC

[Tessa Danielle Guise]

lol...That poem was so kool.. Great job!!! ♥

[Tinotenda Nyevedzanai]

Thanks Tessa :)

[Tessa Danielle Guise]

No problem.. :-)

[Steven J. McCarathy]

This is funny because I have a fat cat named DG and he doesn't do much.

[Tinotenda Nyevedzanai]

Thank you :)

[~]

bahahaha :) this had me laughing out loud i almost woke up my kiddos.. :) -- it has been a while since i last had a cat, but wow, you are sooo darn right!!

[Tinotenda Nyevedzanai]

Thank you :)

[andrew mitchell]

Love It! Sounds like Top Cat cartoons of my day or of felix on the surface or if you scratch the surface a little, is it a person on home detention for being a cat burglar Hmmmmh Naughty kitty!

[Tinotenda Nyevedzanai]

haha brilliant feedback glad you enjoyed it thanks for reading :)