We all suck so much.

We all suck so much.

A Poem by Tinotenda Nyevedzanai
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Why do people like to suck?
They suck cigarettes, milk, p***y, mints, tits, lollipops, vodka, c***s, lemons and lips, milkshakes and fingers and thumbs until they're numb
We just want to consume
Everybody sucks
It's what we do.

© 2016 Tinotenda Nyevedzanai


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Well I never!!!! I'll have you know, I do NOT suck my thumb!!! NOPE, never... and that callous on my thumb is not from sucking it... I have not gone over to the dark side, so there ;0p

er... so, Ms A.T. Cat, intriguing poem you have there, and it doesn't "suck"!!

red(backhomeandsuckinghisthumb)zone

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tinotenda Nyevedzanai

10 Years Ago

Thanks for reading :)



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hahahaha nice poem. I definitely was not expecting it to take such a turn

Posted 8 Years Ago


just call me Mr.Hoover...lol....cool write...we all suck :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tinotenda Nyevedzanai

10 Years Ago

Oh my do we hoover
Well I never!!!! I'll have you know, I do NOT suck my thumb!!! NOPE, never... and that callous on my thumb is not from sucking it... I have not gone over to the dark side, so there ;0p

er... so, Ms A.T. Cat, intriguing poem you have there, and it doesn't "suck"!!

red(backhomeandsuckinghisthumb)zone

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tinotenda Nyevedzanai

10 Years Ago

Thanks for reading :)
Very clever
....and very true. Not what I expected when I first saw the title. It's good =)


Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tinotenda Nyevedzanai

10 Years Ago

Thanks a lot!

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Tinotenda Nyevedzanai
Tinotenda Nyevedzanai

Dallas, Kent



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Just a fifteen year old who enjoys reading and writing. Music makes me happy. New works are in the making and are going to be published soon more..