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There's a ghost in my corner
She sits there quietly
There's a ghost in my corner
Sometimes she sings to me

The ghost in my corner
has white blond hair, skin so pale
The ghost in my corner
Has a horrifying tale

The man who was her father
Took her out one day
The man who was her father
Took her life away

The lady who was her mother
Was really quite sad
The lady who was her mother
Hurt her father bad

There's a ghost in my corner
She sits there quietly
There's a ghost in my corner
She's a good friend for me

Reviews

[Serend1p1ty]

Such a nice poem.
Suggestion though, maybe more imagery or powerful words?
I like your style here though. The repetition works nicely.
Nicely done.

cloud6

[Marina]

I wish I could write like you.

You come up with the most amazing things to write about.
It's absolutley amazing.

=D
Great job.

XxStaySweet,
Rina