The Panda Visit

A fictional panda visits me.

You hear a panda bear knocking at the door. 

Your suppose to be surprised but you know its fiction. 

The panda enters, his sloped back moving in rhythm cadence, 

He centers himself in the dinning area. 

I'm all out of bamboo! 

We have this silence that seems to draw us closer. 

My hand reaches for his paw, his paw reaches for my hand,

Closer and closer briefly we touch each other as the fiction slips away.

Reviews

[Alfred Kukitz]

Thanks Kathy!

I tried my hand at writing some time ago. I seem to get in the way of myself. Take care!

love,
al

[Kathy Van Kurin]

'The Panda Visit'
Alfred Kukitz,
Interesting idea to bring a lithesome and fascinating creature as this to your inner space.
The ending was a place where you sure left it up to us readers to continue the story.
I would of loved to see this become a true work of fiction. Even a teen or young reader story.
Bless you today!
Kathy

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

I Truly love this piece my mother in law loves pandas
she had pictures stuffed animals and small statues of
pandas everywhere LOL...


Thank you for sharing this piece so much Imagination
in this piece very nice.



Thank you for your kind review and comment.


Blessings. kindred poet

[Alfred Kukitz]

Thanks Silver. Your right, my mistake.

[m.s.early]

This is great. The last line sews the whole thing up brilliantly.

The only other comment I would make would be the "your" in the second line. It might ought to be "you're".

[Alfred Kukitz]

No bamboo for him or for anything else. I love Pandas. They are so cool looking. Thanks guys!

[Tree]

This was fantastic; you have a true gift for creating a soft
and tender tension. There was a paw / full of powerful
subtlety. Very, cool.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

but did you have any bamboo for him????
sometimes words don't need to be spoken...a touch creates some kind of understanding....

we need more touch in the world, face to face contact...too much internet...

i like your story here.