Gone

A Stranger visits himself

Ambling for decades in a sand filled mind
Feeling grains of time peeling my skin away
I burrow for water under a tree of time
Awash in mystery I am swallowed whole
Gone without one soul knowing my mind.

Reviews

[Alfred Kukitz]

I am in good graces and without you these words would never be possible.
Thank you all!

[Latifa]

very beautiful and thought provoking Alfred
Feeling grains of time peeling my skin away
I love this line

[John Anderson]

Very beautifully expressed, my friend. Great job!

[Ruth]

Oh, this is so saddening and I felt the energy here, beautiful poem! :) x

[Kelly Scheppers]

"Awash in mystery I am swallowed whole
Gone without one soul knowing my mind."

There have been times in my life where I could have applied this to. Such a profound reading, Alfred!