Watch Those Turns in the Road

When Nothing Works

My words turn to a milky white on a white background.

Puns, jokes stand aghast in vehicular contortions.

I may seem witty but I lost myself to numbness a fortnight ago.

Cantankerous musings stir inside the bell of my mind.

I am ding-a-ling watching the seasons change into nightfall.

The hope I once had evaporated in a photo shoot on a foggy morning.

The Jpeg of my being forever posted on a blog in never land.

Come see me I might know you by the smell in your curtains!

Reviews

[Alfred Kukitz]

Thank You all, thank you all unfortunately I can't write these blessings on milky white backgrounds. I'm using milky white ink!

[Jennie Baron]

A very artful write. There are several memorable lines. I'm going to save this in my favorites!

[A. Amos]

Profound, deep and elegant piece of art, simply amazing!

[Alfred Kukitz]

I thank you all in the most humble way I can echo.

[Matching Socks]

Love it, have to agree with our moon daughter!!

[Moonie]

Wow! I am in love with this poem! My favourite lines would be
"I may seem witty but I lost myself to numbness a fortnight ago"
This has to be one of the best poems I ve ever read! I am sending read requests to everyone I know. This is a masterpiece. :)) in my library! :)

[Alfred Kukitz]

Thanks Briana for visiting.

[Briana O'Connor]

I love the last line. It really adds a punch of mystery. Very deep sentiment here. Thank you for sharing.