Day One Ash

silly me

Day One Ash

I'm cremating myself on the day that it seems
Likely to ride with milk train ease
If I follow instruction to the tee
I just might come out ash
We will have to wait & see.

Finally sprinkled all about
The mailman's foot seemingly under me
If I yell to loud he will begin to flip
So I'd better lay quietly
This being ash is quite hip.

Reviews

[Alfred Kukitz]

Lady & Gentlemen thank you thank you from what ash is left of me.

[Matching Socks]

Lol. :)
Good to see your silly side Al.

[Kristan A. Mohammed]

Very cool piece of work you have penned here. I really admire the great job you have done with the description and the comparison. Its also a really good idea. I'm surprised that no ones thought of it before.
My favourite line is, "So I'd better lay quietly."
Keep up the good work and I hope you never lose your inspiration.