Finding Daylight

the path to a fresh new world

Finding Daylight

Iris sharp in a shock of senses
Staring hard into the howl of night.

Dead!
Sucked the drama right out of her.

You creep into the armies of the self
And scream her loss till night finds a
new daylight!

Reviews

[Alfred Kukitz]

Oh Benita!

I feel as though the shock of the poem caused a diminishing of your sweetness.

Regards,
Al

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

Very interesting stanzas lines here.

Dead!
Sucked the drama right out of her.


Thank you for stopping
by my page and for your
Kind words.

God bless. Benita

[Alfred Kukitz]

I felt like being hit on the head when the thoughts came. What a rush!

Thanks for your storied encouragement Jacob!

Regards,
Al

[jacob erin-cilberto]

wow on the imagery here. "staring hard into the howl of night"
love that phrasing...

"sucked the drama right out of her" another keeper...

and the last stanza brings it altogether...so nicely.

Jacob

we scream loss, but eventually start over.