Rare

transcendent vision

Rare

Hard gnaw,
Senses cold,
You stare,
Paint shifting
on a mixed canvass
She gazes extreme
A masterpiece in rare glances.

Reviews

[Alfred Kukitz]

Thanks Moon's Fairest Daughter for your encouraging words!

Regards,
Al

[Moonie]

"Paint shifting
on a mixed canvas"-quite a glance, I must say!! :))
I can feel that moment, when someone special turns and looks at you, making all the colours around disappear into a haze.. when everything else starts to seem so disoriented, so unimportant...that glance..that look..

A lovely poem, that captures that perfect moment.

[Alfred Kukitz]

Thanks Alf! I wish daily would be a suitable answer but it's not to be.

Regards,
Al

[alf]

Hi Alfred. I wonder how many times you have visited this vision and how many more times you will visit. This is beautifully penned and a joy to read, alf

[Alfred Kukitz]

You found her. Now you can be haunted by discovery.

Hammers have been known to hit nails right on the head!

Regards,

Al

[jacob erin-cilberto]

she gazes, and we wish it were at me....

my stare shifts the scene, and her eyes, away.

but she is so beautiful...can't help but stare.