Witness

the effect of poetry

After Witnessing “Eye of the Needle”

she moved in midair

the gesticulations of her body

caused a spiral intonation

grace could be said only in the eye’s view

even an idiot could be awed

the poet though would melt into his awe 

carried somewhere only his soul knows.

Reviews

[Paul Bell]

Always good to look deep into the poem.

[Alfred Kukitz]

Thanks KL!

Sounds like this one is in the hall of fame.

Regards,
Al

[Lyn Anderson]

What a brilliant tribute to a brilliant poem.

[Alfred Kukitz]

Thanks Lola Bee!

It's one of my hit singles I guess!

Regards,
Al

[Lola_Bee]

Short and beautiful. It leaves the reader with sweet mysterious connotations

[Alfred Kukitz]

Thanks Useman!

Thanks so much!

Regards,
Al

[Usman Muhammad]

This is wonderful...Makes you think about it...
Looking forward to read your other works

[Alfred Kukitz]

Thanks Robert!

I feel so humbled by the praise and the poem.

Regards,
Al

[Robert Haigh]

Interesting, uplifting thoughts! A short, but powerful poem!

[Alfred Kukitz]

Dear Sami,

I feel honored when you visit my pen.

Regards,
Al