Witness

the effect of poetry

After Witnessing “Eye of the Needle”

she moved in midair

the gesticulations of her body

caused a spiral intonation

grace could be said only in the eye’s view

even an idiot could be awed

the poet though would melt into his awe 

carried somewhere only his soul knows.

Reviews

[Alfred Kukitz]

Upon seeing the Tiger visiting I humbly give thanks and for a brief moment rub the gorgeous fur.

Regards,
Al

[V]

Thoughtful, light, but nice to read piece of writing. I like the descriptions, the mood. Makes one's mind wheel a bit...

[Alfred Kukitz]

Hi Dave!

Glad you liked it! Happy Holidays!

regards,
al

[David Scott]

This is a great definition of what it means to be a poet. One who is willing to witness...
I am thankful for the opportunity to witness your creative expression here.

[Alfred Kukitz]

Thanks Lynn! I love this poem because Kelly Scheppers inspired me.

Regards,
Al

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Elegantly beautiful tribute to the soul journey of a poet :) I love this!

[Alfred Kukitz]

Thanks Paloma and thank you for visiting.

Regards,
Al

[1VJ]

Such a wondrous inspiration, I too am melted in your composed reverence.

[Alfred Kukitz]

My poet friend Kelly Scheppers caused this phenomenon. What an overwhelming response. I can truly say she gives food to my soul. Thanks Rocksie!

regards,
al

[Rocksie]

Very authentic piece. It's relatable yet unique at the same time. Great to read!