Witness

the effect of poetry

After Witnessing “Eye of the Needle”

she moved in midair

the gesticulations of her body

caused a spiral intonation

grace could be said only in the eye’s view

even an idiot could be awed

the poet though would melt into his awe 

carried somewhere only his soul knows.

Reviews

[Latifa]

I love this piece Alfred, one of your best :), so intriguing

[Alfred Kukitz]

Hi Ana! Thank you so much. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Regards,
Al

[Matching Socks]

Absolutely stunning, Al. The poet 'feels' what others only see.

[Alfred Kukitz]

Thank you Wordman! Have a good day!

Regards,
Al

[wordman]

a profound write,even an idiot could understand

[Alfred Kukitz]

Thank you Julie! I trust you are well.

regards,
al

[MsJewel]

A beautiful response to Kelly's words Alfred. Stunning!

:) Julie

[Alfred Kukitz]

Moonskittles,

I just have a natural liking for you. There are some folks here I would like to meet. You would be one of them. Thank you Honey!

regards,
al

[~]

awww :D you are so kind!

[~]

ahhh, that is a very appropriate response to Kelly's write. Your words compliment her passion so well alfred!! loved it :D

[Alfred Kukitz]

Thank you scream out loud I was inspired by Kelly Scheppers. Read her!

Regards,
Al