Do You Love

unexpected

We were caught in the minutia of trance 

speaking to us in a rare instance of understanding

“Do You Love”

I could hardly explain myself,

likewise, she felt utterly afraid

finally out in the open, 

swirls of gravity caught us in a dance,

we were mesmerized 

our senses completely obliterated

ultimately we married in our moment of grace.

Reviews

[Alfred Kukitz]

Yes, Jelena, a moment of grace. June 2011 I'm leaving only to return later.

Thanks FT!

Regards,
Al

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that moment when that trance encapsulates our very beings and hearts are enthralled... marriage is the only way out... a lovely write, Al

[Alfred Kukitz]

Benita! Do You Love. Thank you!

Regards,
Al

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

Beautiful stanzas lines.

Ultimately we married in our
moment of grace.


Such a sweet
innocent moment
indeed.


Thank you for sharing.

God bless. Benita

[Alfred Kukitz]

Thanks Pryde. There are days one can never forget!

Regards,

al

[Pryde Foltz]

ultimately we married in our moment of grace.

An elusive and much appreciated moment … great write, Al:)

[Alfred Kukitz]

this was Jelena, Croatia women, as we lived for a month in morning fire!

Thanks D!

regards,
al

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oh wow, that is not that far from my birthplace :D

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Awww, this was beautiful. I loved it. How wonderful when that special one surpasses the dogs of our conscience and reason, that we can only think with our hearts and soul. a magical dance :D