A Whisper's Life

Who am I but a whisper living inside a scream!

Reviews

[Alfred Kukitz]

Greetings Brianna! Thanks for the offering but I shy from contest.

Regards,
Al

[Brianna Brie]

This is an oxymoron of sorts. Amazing thought! If you ever want to enter it in a six sentence contest, it would be a winner. Perhaps, something like, "A whisper lives inside a scream!".

[Alfred Kukitz]

You better! I'm about to let it all out! Whoa!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

how profound this line is...what's inside eventually will come out....i am covering my ears...

j.

[mattavelli]

This line is very powerful; like the "pale blue dot" images of Earth. Thanks for sharing.

[Alfred Kukitz]

Ana!

What a delight to hear from you. I hope you are well & everything is fine. Thank you!

Regards,
Al

[Matching Socks]

A plea for help that is overshadowed by a cry for attention?
This one can mean so much. Nice job Al.

[Alfred Kukitz]

My pleasure. Thanks for the sage advice.

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Such a powerful, thought-provoking piece, Al... universal yet personal... I am so happy you posted this as a poem...