Pocket Check

MT pocket? hmmmm

Pocket Check

Among the other joints of my journey

wandering the illusions of the Earth

I came upon a faerie land in my left hip pocket

know to all as fantasy.

You could see the little buggers

dancing down the isle

cute little rascals all with a smile

all champions in the field of grins

So check your pockets daily

for fear of laundering them

soon you may see a surprise

with eyes afresh that live inside time.

Reviews

[Alfred Kukitz]

Ladies! Thank You so much!

There are times when you don't believe what comes out of your mind. This is one of them.

regards,
al

[Lydia Shutter]

The whimsical fantasy in this one is wonderful. I enjoyed it. Lydi**

[Matching Socks]

Cute poem, Al.
I wish I had a few in my pocket for those days when I could use some magic. :)

[Alfred Kukitz]

Benita! I am so glad you liked it. God bless you girl!

Regards,
Al

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

LMBO... such a imagination.

You make me laugh you're
a woot such a funny guy.

I loved this so cute.

I hope you're well BTW 😜

God bless. Benita

[Alfred Kukitz]

I was going through my list of poems, I want to give this to a gal turning 21 on Monday, I edited the piece then looked for it on WC and found it wasn't there. Glad I picked it. Thanks guys! It was a fun write!

Regards,
Al

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I've hear of coat checks, spot checks, road checks, bounced checks but never pocket check... I was going to write a longer response but you've reminded me to go check all my pockets for those little grinning buggers... I can tell you this, however, if I find any hiding in my pockets they will be very poor off :)

I love this fantastical write, Al... it reminds me not too take life to seriously and to always try and see the world with fresh eyes... thanks for sharing

[jacob erin-cilberto]

this is so cool...those little rascals are not permanent press, and they hate the rinse cycle...

but put them through spin
and it might increase their grin.


a fun piece, Al...

we all have a pocket full of fantasy...if only we allow it to pop out and greet us with some smiles.