A Kiss Discovered

a kiss finding direction

A Kiss Discovered

Once there was a kiss somewhere

waiting to blossom nightly

until it turned the corner confusion 

reigned on its lips so slightly

now the site grew gently

and a lady friend had closed her

eyes so tightly

and behold the miracle of a kiss

gently breezed on her lips like a

gentleman go lightly.

Reviews

[Alfred Kukitz]

Oh the sweet kiss of the moment! Thanks FT!

Regards,
Al

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a kiss in waiting is a kiss worth waiting for... it's the part of living that's the best, setting the stage for all that follows...nice work, AL...

[Alfred Kukitz]

I have missed many! Thank you Valentine for your visit!

Regards,
Al

[Valentine]

A wind blown kiss, might possibly be missed. Valentine

[Alfred Kukitz]

Pat loved your response, a poem in itself. Thanks!

regards,
al

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Al, a kiss can be like a
butterfly or a breeze, so gentle
yet like a seal placed on a letter
delivered on butterfly wings.
truly. Pat

[Alfred Kukitz]

I put the kiss at the forefront thinking I could make the kiss the main character. It worked out nicely. Thanks for the visit boys and girls!

Regards,
Al

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

Beautiful love the line.

Gentleman go lightly.

God bless Benita

[jacob erin-cilberto]

this is so cool...especially the "gentleman go lightly" line...

nothing like a kiss....it's love, respect, tenderness, the most intimate part of making love, i think...

means the most.
but before that first one, there is confusion, trepidation, uncertainty...but if accepted...let the lips meet over and over.