Sweet Pain

love hurts

Sweet Pain

Jaded like a sweet rose thorn
I prick myself into your beauty
Pain, that wee pain, sighs in echoes
Lasting till we meet again.

Reviews

[Alfred Kukitz]

Thanks Jane! I like this one myself. Some poems hug the writer. It's am sweet hug!

Regards,
Al

[Jane Taylor Hardy]

The pain and joy and beauty contained in love is so eloquently penned by your elegant poem.

[Alfred Kukitz]

Thanks Jacob! I finally found my real English teacher.

Regards,
Al

[jacob erin-cilberto]

what a great line "I prick myself into your beauty"

so innovative...the personification and metaphor in this short piece are breathtaking...

j.