Huh......What

talking to One's self

Huh......What?

I haven't found anything 

only discovered my recent surprise 

I'm here with you living alone

keeping the shores of my life from view

looking into silence that I might find another you

You keep me abreast of solo undertakings

I am intuitive about finding you

but for the sake of brevity

I'll look the other way.

Reviews

[Alfred Kukitz]

I guess Lynn the movie got away from me. I stated talking to myself wondering whether the movie will visit me again but ..........anyway thanks honey!

Regards,
Al

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I love this! Those private conversations we have with our selves. You are not alone, sir lol Awesome poetry!

[Alfred Kukitz]

What a lucky guy waking up next to you honey with your own version of Huh.......What!

I bet yours are cool!

Love you,
Al

[~]

:) I wake up my hubby in the mornings when i do that lol.. sometimes it is really bad :D :D

[Alfred Kukitz]

I bet you do! I should increase the font size it's to small. What a riot writing can be and then sharing it.

Thanks Jacob!

regards,
al

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i do this a lot---talking to myself....but also to that love who used to be here with me...or in my case, several, but they aren't listening...and i don't really know if want them to hear anyway.

i really like the near rhyme in this.

j.

[Alfred Kukitz]

FT so glad you could stop by. This is kind of silly and fun the way words and ideas bend around the imagination. Thank you!

regards,
al

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a conversation that is quite relatable in the quiet and solitude of my life...this is a clever and brilliant take on internal reflection.. well-done, Al