Finding the Heights

Fly boy fly

Finding the Heights

Stairways in a lust
Elevation
Higher, Higher,
The flatness gnawing at the stairs
A boy in ascent finds sky in the air
Upon a whistle from his soul
A bird carries him to his new air.

Reviews

[Alfred Kukitz]

I think the Pyreness made me do it. Like the Sound of Music I heard the mountain whistling to me.

Thanks Jacob!

Regards,
Al

[jacob erin-cilberto]

really like the last line...i was singing Stairway to Heaven...i am listening for that whistle.

[Alfred Kukitz]

What a pretty girl you are! I'll keep that in mind Latefa. In the meantime it's time to visit the Paris.

Regards,
Al

[Latifa]

A boy in ascent finds sky in the air
Upon a whistle from his soul
A bird carries him to his new air.
the ending is splendid, this poems can be in chapters, because those last lines makes us curious to find out what happened to that boy within that new air.