The Walk

try this

The Walk

Would you walk with me a while

Extend your breath into the normal ness of life

Seem to reach beyond the everyday

A pause in the gait

You hear the idle chatter of silence

as a bemused smile circles the lips

You have found yourself in a completely other world

just as simple as that first step.

Reviews

[Alfred Kukitz]

Thanks Jacob! I was dry for a while but I told myself let's see what happens tonight.


Regards,

Al

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i can't even begin to tell you a favorite line in this poem...everyone of them is...
the idle chatter of silence" damn, Al...i wish i had come up with that line...and "extend your breath into the normalness of life"