Old Man's Tree
A Poem by
Alfred Kukitz
it never grew
Old Man's Tree
The old man's tree
A scrawny branch
Fickle beyond belief
He sat down one day
on a branch
and paused his life
in the coming century.
© 2015 Alfred Kukitz
Reviews
Thanks Dave!
Happy Holidays!
Regards,
Al
Posted 10 Years Ago
Time travel eh? Nice sound bite of poetry.
Posted 10 Years Ago
Time travel eh? Nice sound bite of poetry.
My old man planted a number of fruit trees but never cared for them for many years. Thanks guy!
Regards,
Al
Posted 10 Years Ago
My old man planted a number of fruit trees but never cared for them for many years. Thanks guy!
Regards,
Al
i really like the metaphor...many of us live on those scrawny branches....when i was a kid, the neighbor had this willow tree...gave my dad a branch....my dad planted it....the neighbor's tree died in a month and our tree ended up growing so high it hovered over their garage...
never know how a branch will fare...or a man?
Posted 10 Years Ago
i really like the metaphor...many of us live on those scrawny branches....when i was a kid, the neighbor had this willow tree...gave my dad a branch....my dad planted it....the neighbor's tree died in a month and our tree ended up growing so high it hovered over their garage...
never know how a branch will fare...or a man?
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Added on November 22, 2015
Last Updated on November 22, 2015
Author
Alfred Kukitz Deering, NH
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Yes, I'm still here. Just jazzing up my about me story. Sorry I don't die at the end.
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