Eyes of Rem

sleepy, dreamy you

Eyes of Rem


A furniture of darkness crosses into
the room of closure
You lounge in the comfort of your view
Napping, finding a special breath in slumber,
until you inhale deeply your dream finds
another soul of wonder
As darkness blinds the sleepy eyes of rem.

Reviews

[Alfred Kukitz]

I haven't had a good dream for a while. When are they coming. I sleep well, get 6 hours with a nap in the afternoon. I'm waiting!

Thanks Jacob!

Regards,
Al

[jacob erin-cilberto]

the first two lines are so perfect with the personification and metaphor..there is always room in the room of dreams, for another soul of wonder...always room.

j.