In a god creation

Spiritual DNA

In a god creation

In a god creation I fold into my breath
Inhale lungs and chest
Exhale by virtue of the spine
I fill with silence
allowing the day another breath

Reviews

[Alfred Kukitz]

What a way of being! Thanks Solar!

Regards,
Al

[Solar]

Mindful breathes the body of this poem! Beautiful!

[Alfred Kukitz]

Thanks Doodley! Your presence is a freashful reminder that writing lives in both of us from many miles away.


Regards,
Al

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A nicely written piece, Al.

I can see the yoga analogy and the bodily effects of meditation here.

Good job.

[Alfred Kukitz]

It happened during yoga, which is a contentment in itself. I was a woed by the idea.

Thanks Jacob!

Regards,
Al

[jacob erin-cilberto]

this has such a strong feel of contentment and understanding of the real meaning of being alive.
Al, i really love that line "Exhale by virtue of the spine/ I fill with silence"

and that is certainly not awkward silence, but one to embrace.

j.