Pure Mind

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Pure Mind

Followed by a hunch
She bounced into the theory of her own imagination
in a desert stone cold mind
a small whisper enveloped her
Was it miracle
Was it cure
Was it insight into a deadly force
She was now in the midst of uncovering pure mind.

Reviews

[Alfred Kukitz]

HI Mou,

What I enjoy about others reviewing my work is the return visit I make nd the two fold enjoyment of reading the review and my own work again. I love this piece. Thank you!

Regards,
Al

[mou]

"a small whisper enveloped her"--Beautiful !
It is quite true that a Cristal clear soul can beat the deadly force.
A profound piece of writing.
Thanks for sharing.

[Alfred Kukitz]

Hi Steph!

I've musing on ways an individual can learn outside of the traditional method. How can one encourage epiphany, insight, serendipity. These features of the human mind and the imagination hold a key to furthering knowledge.

Thanks!

Regards,
Al

[highonwords]

introspection and humility i think hold the key to learning more about yourself and understanding others

you are welcome, al

always,
steph

[highonwords]

i love 'the theory of her own imagination' and 'in a desert stone cold mind', gives the reader a sense that the subject is gaining insight and wisdom with clarity and a precise level-headedness, an impartiality, without her own prejudices

steph

[Alfred Kukitz]

I was angling for knowledge to embrace serendipity, epiphany, ortho cognition and insight in understanding the complexity of disease processes, thereby finding cures, alternatives to a life of chronic disease.

There is some dark matter in the RNA of human cells. I feel it holds promise for healing but we don't know nearly enough about it. Research is fine but scientists need to employee other features of the human mind.

Thanks Jacob!

Regards,
Al

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i like what you are doing with the idea of imagination and whispers...and really how our imagination whispers to us...and we want clarity as to what is truth...this sounds like the whispers of survival of a disease...and the debate as to exactly what happened...

how the deadly force is beaten by a pure mind.