Love Laugh

Ho Ho Ho

Love Laugh

I could almost hug the surroundings of your soul.
Offer a nickel for every little smile
Count freckles on a petite nose you own
Wash us away in laughter as we swim in a star
You are all this, the all inclusive pronoun
Making my laugh love you more!

Reviews

[Alfred Kukitz]

Hi Kelly! I really missed you. Thanks so much for your kind review.

Love,
Al

[Kelly Scheppers]

Oh, to be the "all inclusive pronoun". My subtle freckles and I adore this! ; )

[Alfred Kukitz]

Thanks Pryde! When are you coming back?

Regards,
Al

[Pryde Foltz]

A beautiful and spiritual romantic write, Al. Nice to read your pen again:)

[Alfred Kukitz]

What a tickle of the belly I found myself looking at laughter from head to toe. Cheers for love!

Thanks Jacob!

Regards,
Al

[jacob erin-cilberto]

damn, the last two lines are so cool...."the all inclusive pronoun"---

"making my laugh love you more" wonderful personification...

j.

[Alfred Kukitz]

Thanks Lydia! I'm afraid my military service has denied me children and grandchildern. I was thinking of Katie & Keira my grand nieces.

Regards,

Al

[Lydia Shutter]

The first line of this one drew me in. All I could think of were my two granddaughters and how each time they smile, they make my world even brighter than it already is. Can we love them more? Is it even possible? Of course, I have no idea if this is about your grandchildren, but this is where your words took me. Great write. Lydi**