It's All Here

at least I think so

It's All Here

It's a short gaze out the window,
A breath that holds back its exhale,
A small bird sound in morning air,
Your steps walking in a paradise of air
It's so many thing that are nothing
Nothing but small reminders that you are here
Here in the breath of 4 billion people
Standing in a quiet pose
In a quiet pose, just standing,
Feeling like it's all here.

Reviews

[Alfred Kukitz]

It's peculiar sensing something, something just sifting around my head. I could live there for centuries. Oh how quietness can fill the head.

Thanks Jacob!

Regards,
Al

[jacob erin-cilberto]

this is like my dad feels my mom still...he knows she is still out there and they will meet again on some plane---after we die, i guess we just become a part of the universe, particles mixing with the rest.

nicely done, Al.

j.

[Alfred Kukitz]

The sofa has a quiet in the evening that lends my mind to talk and so I say to KL Goode thank you, thank you most for I feel a bond with you.

Regards,
Al

[Lyn Anderson]

There is a softness, a lightness, to this poem -- it is a wistful, but grateful sigh.

[Alfred Kukitz]

Such devilish beauty should touch me like this. I swoon!

Thanks Pryde!

Regards,
Al

[Pryde Foltz]

You can just feel others some time, can't you. A wonderful wonderful write:)