Shoes Alive

11D

Shoes Alive

Close to weather
Seas summons the arc of my thought
Clouds encapsulate the veer of my ways
I host the first article of happiness
Second the tears as drops of rain
I'm home in the hills of my memory
gathering a smile as if it were my last day.

I can feel my feet surrendering to sunshine
The arctic breeze miles away
If cold would capture my spirit
I'll fly over its wave
If you could see me now
a child like grin on my muse
and the weather living in my shoes.

Reviews

[Alfred Kukitz]

Thanks E!

It's the size 11D of poetry.

Regards,
Al

[Einstein Noodle]

yes...one should always fly shoeless ;) thanks for the very pleasant dreamy experience ... one can so easily treat one's self all in the mind .. its just a close my eyes away ;) love this line especially:
"I host the first article of happiness "
it's very empowering to me!
E.

[Alfred Kukitz]

Thank You Moon!

Your lovely face, your words, I feel like you just kissed me. Hmmmmmm!

Regards,
Al

[Moonie]

That's so sweet!

[Moonie]

You have a way with words, Al...how you combine the essence of something, the feel of something impalpable to a completely unrelated tangible article...it just makes the poem all the more beautiful...

I can't pick my favourite lines...there are just too many of them...:)))

[Alfred Kukitz]

The cold of Michigan I can hardly stand it's feel. I don't think owning a dog is a good idea. Here in PA I had one terrible nasty day. The walk lasted a mere 20 minutes. Thank you for visiting!

Regards,
Al

[Alfred Kukitz]

Thanks Jacob!

I felt as though someone was tickling my feet!

Regards,
Al

[Alfred Kukitz]

Thanks Latifa!

Almost forgot about you stranger. So glad to hear your words.

Regards,
Al

[Valentine]

Brr, here in northern Michigan I am feeling it in my shoes too. Wish there was warmer sunshine on its way here. Valentine

[jacob erin-cilberto]

really like this, the feeling from it...especially the line "I'm home in the hills of my memory"---

and right now...with our weather..."i feel it living in my shoes"--for sure.

j.

[Latifa]

I lovve the imagery that is laid in these beautiful lines, I felt the vividness of the poem :)