In a Tale of Politics

the king must die

In a Tale of Politics

In a tale of spin and merry go round
I find the symmetry of mankind well found
When upon a tribal of men
with decision for well being just being stirred
We had a structure of remarkable breeze
that included everyone in the body of thee.

Hence when Eve's Apple did eat
the politics of hierarchy came of heaven and hell
and soon men became kings to tell
that I am higher than the tallest of trees
and soon civilization came and fell
As history of nations came to be
a bite of an apple that planted the seed.

Reviews

[Alfred Kukitz]

Hi Lydia!

Nice of you to stop by. This one had some juice to it.

Regards,
Al

[Alfred Kukitz]

Thanks Tazeen!

I will keep writing. They come to me out of the ether.

Regards,
Al

[Lydia Shutter]

Great take on the Garden of Eden....that's where it all started. I liked the scattered rhyming in this one, Al. Lydi**

[Tazeen Ahmed]

the way the truth of politics is conveyed is flawless..
i pondered long over this line-"As history of nations came to be
a bite of an apple that planted the seed."
that's such an appreciable imagination.
my fav. line here-"the politics of hierarchy came of heaven and hell"
keep writing :)

[Alfred Kukitz]

I think this was the real fall, hierarchy.

Thanks!

Al

[jacob erin-cilberto]

yes, what a sour apple we have bitten into...
bitter taste...and that serpent just watching us, smiling from his high rise tree.

j.

[Alfred Kukitz]

Thanks Kathy,

I couldn't sleep last night thinking how was I going to write this idea. Can you imagine a small part of universal life possessing a morsel of politics?

Regards,
Al

[Valentine]

That must have been a very big bite and very hard to swallow as we are all still having to swallow a part of it. Valentine