Hello

A.M. Greetings

Hello

A shadow of sweetness
Tears searching for the sky
My humbled awareness peeking
at the dimples in your smile.

Reviews

[Alfred Kukitz]

Thanks Bacchus!

On certain days and certain moments the flower of words spring forth.

Happy Happy '17

Al

[Bacchus]

a shadow of sweetness
is exactly what the the poem is
tears and dimples...
simply put

[Alfred Kukitz]

Thanks Valentine!

Having Jackson here is reason enough!

Regards,
Al

[Alfred Kukitz]

Thanks Jacob!

Some thoughts take me back to my nursing days when politics wasn't an issue and my tenderness of the ill shined.

Regards,
Al

[Alfred Kukitz]

Thanks Tazeen!

Did I tell you, a love dimples, the problem is they won't marry me.

Happy Happy '17

Al

[Valentine]

Not many have that A.M. smile without that first cup of coffee. Valentine

[jacob erin-cilberto]

you are in a mood this morning...and it is producing some excellent lines---such tender words.

j.

[Tazeen Ahmed]

Hello
Stunning and symbolically meaningful lines.