In the Sweetness

I'll never tell

In the Sweetness

Did I find you in the sweetness
your laughter stumbling around corners
You smile falling way behind
Or was it some dream of never seeing you
following illusions in the corners of my mind

Reviews

[Alfred Kukitz]

Thank You Emilia!

My......I know how to spell your pretty name.

Regards,
Al

[Emilia Cole]

Heh okay...although I hate my name call me Emi

[Alfred Kukitz]

Ok Emi!......

............al

[Emilia Cole]

Thank you...

[Emilia Cole]

Wow it's like whispers of something from a dream.Or something that you wish you saw...it's sweet

[Alfred Kukitz]

Thanks Benita!

One of my favorites!

Regards,
Al

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

I really love this so sweet and lovely.

[Alfred Kukitz]

Thank You Kathy!

It's rare to see my name in print from someone else.

Regards,
Al

[Alfred Kukitz]

Thank you Lola Bee!

It turns out to be one of my favorites.

Regards,
Al

[Kathy Van Kurin]

Alfred Kukitz,
In the Sweetness reminds me of a yummy two layer cake with frosting all round. "Laughter stumbling around corners" and the rest tool Lovely and whimsical! Blessings Kathy

[Lola_Bee]

Beautifully written, short yet so powerful. your illustration of pure memory...

[Alfred Kukitz]

Thanks Miss Sharon!

I do my best with fewer words.

Happy Happy '17

Al

[Miss Sharon]

Wow! You've packed a big punch into few words...that's talent! Love it. ~Sharon