Hooray

swim......anyone?

Hooray

A peanut butter molecule,
swimming in a bowl of cereal
A breath stroke morning
Gathering almond milk soaking my pores
It's a long way to the other side of the bowl
I swim changing to the back stroke
Rice Chex, pumpkin seeds get in my way
Will I ever make it?
Hey! I'm on the other side!
Hooray!

Reviews

[Alfred Kukitz]

Thank you Emilia!

My wild horses bow to your compliment!

Regards,
Al

[Emilia Cole]

all i could do was laugh thanks for that

[Alfred Kukitz]

Thanks Doodley!

My mind turned a bit to a wild horse episode in verse. Ride em cowboy!

Regards,
Al

[Alfred Kukitz]

Thanks KL!

Simon wrote a song about being a corn flake swimming in a bowl. It's where I got the idea. The peanut butter is powder, low fat, diabetes offers few options with food, hence, all that stuff in one bowl.

Regards,
Al

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Hahaha. Very inventive!

I love the idea....swimming in the morning breakfast bowl, instead of doing the real hard laps in the pool.

But peanut butter in the cereal? Eww. I will pass on that!

Another very original and witty piece, Alfred.

[Lyn Anderson]

I really like this, in an odd, perplexing sort of way -- can't imagine all those things in one bowl. :)