The Sound of........

The Sound of..............




As simple as element
the wave upon the shore
the self here and gone
away from ourselves
brings an unusual sound
epiphany orchestrates the sound of ............

Reviews

[Alfred Kukitz]

Thanks Andrew!

I enjoyed the poetry of your statement!

Regards,
Al

[andrew mitchell]

our heart beats came to mind as did daydreaming in ocean's thoughts, but the ocean or be it the sea erases all thoughts in its soothing dance.

[Alfred Kukitz]

Thanks Bacchus!

I wanted you to taste how the epiphany works it's magic.

Regards,
Al

[Bacchus]

how mysterious
yet the waves
seem to be put in motion
the crashing and crashing

[Alfred Kukitz]

Thanks Jacob!

I like writing where the reader can add to my writing. It gives me satisfaction!

Regards,
Al

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i like how you leave it open to hear what we hear, ......of ourselves...the self while it is here...the self as it leaves...and the self when it is gone.

j.