Tears

a cry among tears

Tears

Rain in tears
I faded my sunshine
Took the chalice of intimacy
Into your divine eyes
and sipped your sorrow
in the coming tears.

Reviews

[Alfred Kukitz]

Thanks Hanna!

If only every writing carried the hugeness of this small writing.

Regards,
Al

[Hanna01]

This is honestly amazing! You play with words so well, I wish I could do the same!

[Alfred Kukitz]

Thanks Jacob!

I'm watching Luck, a show about the horse racing world, it's filled me with memories of Harvey and Ben, two horses I knew well.

Regards,
Al

[jacob erin-cilberto]

that chalice will always be full of such potent memories....