day none

hi

day none

murder
or just a few breaths left
torso blown out
lips swooning toward the moon
when the vapor comes
particles scatter
back to day none

Reviews

[Alfred Kukitz]

thanks jacob!

i was thinking of ken, who recently died, and desiring to meet him in the vapor.

regards,
al

[jacob erin-cilberto]

the murder of a life, by self-destruction or just nature...in the end of days, we go back to before day one, which is day none.

i really like all of these new writes so much.
j.