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home

in the hour of step one i fall
sky views my proneness
waves, whispers alone,
yes, alone,
earth has my back,
my eyes have the universe,
a body sings silence
i see everything happening
in simultaneous mind
home can be the strangest
place i know.

Reviews

[Alfred Kukitz]

hi Jewel!

i missed your beautiful smile. thank you for the visit!

regards,
al

[Alfred Kukitz]

thanks Sami!

living in the everyday pattern of retired living my mind decided to break off from the normal.

regards,
al

[MsJewel]

Short and powerful - always a pleasure to read your poetry :) Julie

[Sami Khalil]

"in the hour of step one i fall
sky views my proneness
waves, whispers alone,
yes, alone,
earth has my back,
my eyes have the universe,
a body sings silence
i see everything happening
in simultaneous mind
home can be the strangest
place i know."

[Sami Khalil]

Wow! I love this Alfred. One of your strongest poem. So good and powerful. Excellent effort here...