in the sound of it all

can you hear me now

in the sound of it all

as with voice so small
help seems a huge word
if i can call out to you
would the universe hear me

along sound’s path the velocity
of hearing causes tremors among
ear drums, anvil & hammer
silence waits as i wait
finally i can hear myself in
the melody of free speech

Reviews

[Alfred Kukitz]

thanks dotty!

you really are pretty!

regards,
al

[User]

Bravo my friend.............. :)

[Alfred Kukitz]

thanks emma!

sometimes the most unbelievable things are persons who not just seem incredible but are incredible.

regards,
al

[Alfred Kukitz]

thanks sette!

i’m in good company with wisdom like a sage in meditation.

regards,
al

[sette]

sometimes the sounds we hear can be a mystery after all. There are hidden messages in every sound if we try to analyze. But people have been busy with just living day by day that a lot tend to forget about simple things just like trying to decipher the message a sound can bring.

[emmajoy]

'.. would the universe hear me .. .. .. .. along sound’s path'

Tis said if you whisper loud enough, the right person will hear. Perhaps you've read the same words -(can't think where they come from) but make sense. As to the universe.. echoes bounce from all the right places, so again, who knows who they'll touch . And, as to free speech, it's only free before spoken aloud.. after than it costs to listen! Your words are ones to make the mind bend..