ancient dream

awakening

ancient dream

i could smile without a face
hears whispers from far away place
see me in a dream, an ancient dream,
whereupon i walked into your arms
felt the tug of love’s sweet charm
but upon my real birth from where i came
i fell down in my new land
my rise be felled by this strange place
when i reach for my ancient dream
i feel as though heaven calls to me.

Reviews

[Alfred Kukitz]

thanks jacob!

one of my eerie haunting beauties!

regards,
al

[jacob erin-cilberto]

because that dream has passed to another place...but yes, it is still there. and you will realize it once again...in another life.

j.

[Alfred Kukitz]

thanks lydia!

would you believe i was making the bed when ancient dream came into my head. i was really surprised by the piece.

regards,
al

[Lydia Shutter]

"i could smile without a face
hears whispers from far away place"

Dreamy and magical words! As we grow older, a lot of our lives morph into dreams. Perhaps we edit them a bit, who's to say? There is a peaceful feeling to this one, Al. I liked it a lot. Lydi**