silence in a new way

no bells ringing

silence in a new way

chimed by sound into a bell of whispers

ding and dong gathered up all the silences offered

together we made an outline of plans

ding says to me

if i have only one sound to give

how can anyone hear the coming land

dong interrupted in a most kind way

it’s okay ding we will make silence 

in a brand new way.

Reviews

[Alfred Kukitz]

Thanks Kelly!

I cherish your voice and your soul. What a women!

regards,
al

[Kelly Scheppers]

I'm going to chime in here and say wow, in as many octaves as I can! I always knew you were special!

[Alfred Kukitz]

thanks doodley!

i know my church days included everyday but saturday and now creation is my church.

regards,
al

[Alfred Kukitz]

thanks jacob!

above the din i heard a voice say.........

regards,
al

[Alfred Kukitz]

thanks marilyn!

talent is only worthwhile in humble’s eye!

regards,
al

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This is a unique write, Alfred!

Since the bells are the epitome of sound it is interesting that now they prefer to make silence. Perhaps that is suggestive of the dying days of the church; where those bells are now ringing with increasingly less frequency.

A fascinating piece, Alfred. Certainly one to think about. Nicely written.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

and whatever there was, the bell chimes far away now, and the feeling is one of keeping company with self...and the silence is deafening.
j.

[marilyn 1225]

UNIQUE AND VERY CREATIVE AND CUTE... YOU ARE TALENTED!!