SHALL I COMFORT YOU?

feeling my loves entire lifetime.

SHALL I COMFORT YOU?

In days that play feelings with your soul

and the night just seems to caress all your inners

“shall I comfort the soul being comforted”

“shall I kiss the divine nature of your footsteps”

seems like a decade of lifetimes when  I shouldered your youth

as smiles and dimples fade to sunlight and the withered brow

comes to rest.

Reviews

[billyjf]

I like the sense of retrospect. The text is quite too small for me to read.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

wow that is a lot to feel....and i am sure the speaker has felt similarly and can empathized greatly with the subject of this poem...sharing past, present and future.
j.

[Coyote Poetry]

The words, honest and true. You took the reader with you into real life and special places. Thank you Alfred for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote