BREEZZZZZE

blowing in the wind

BREEZZZZZE

On fun filled winds with eyebrows gathering storm

I click my lips and find the magic in the form

Nearly winded and windy in the arc of my epiphany 

Someone calls, someone answers but I know its not me

In following centuries around the grin of time

I nurture the fundamentals of why there is rhyme!

Reviews

[Kathy Van Kurin]

'BREEZZZZE"
Alfred Kukutz,
Wind is an inspiration. The earth has held it's sway since forever:
"in following centuries around the grin of time"
This poem is fun and holds the feeling of it's sound and swish
through leaves and boughs. 'Eyebrows gathering storm; like
the eye of the storm. clever.
It is rhythmic in a way:
" I nurture the fundamentals of why there is rhyme."
Loved the catchy phrases and how you interchanged human
character with a windy day.
Blessings,
Kathy

[Alfred Kukitz]

Who who who is this in a rhyme or did time stand still?

love,
al

[Lydia Shutter]

What an adorable write this is....the form and rhyme are spot on, Al! "I click my lips!" What a great line! I enjoyed this. Lydi**