Rain" and lighting"

 

Rain".

 

the rain cries for passion or love ... but all they get pain.

they rain is tear's coming from all the angel's crying cause of all the lies and hatried in life. they want us to love each other for who we are not for who we want to be.

 

Thunder".

 

The thunder is who ever are god is to us. He get's mad when we don't do the right thing. he put us in this body and world to see how happy and cherish that you were very special to him to put you in earth.

Reviews

[emman]

This is true :) nice

[Chris]

Takes time and effort learning to be who we are...

You've some good thoughts here...

Chris

[Jeremy Baker]

Nice idea, Alley. Some minor typos - "hatried" instead of "hatred" and "lighting" instead of "lightning". Otherwise good!