Last Goodbye

Just a really short poem explaining how I feel..

Your words f*****g hurt,
They feel like a million knifes stabbing through my paper heart.
My heart's bleeding, oozing out blood,
But who cares? You surely don't

It only takes a few more words to leave your mouth,
before I burst, before I explode and take this loaded gun to my head..

Reviews

[JazmanianDevil]

This is short and really gives off a lot of emotion. I usually am not one for cursing but in your case it's warranted. I really feel your pain and anger. Great poem! Feel free to send me more requests! And hopefully you feel better :)

[Gee]

Jeez,you're a wee bit cheesed off!