10 word poem

I decided to write a poem using only 10 words, this is my first attempt at this kind of poem.

It is constantly raining in my head; I need shelter.

Reviews

[Mai Marquez]

I love this! and you can work with this even more whittle it down to the bare bones.

It is raining
In my head
I need shelter

Love the imagery this gave to me.

[A. Amos]

Deep, interesting and beautiful...good write