Happy.

You look at me
and i seem happy.
I smile, I laugh and giggle
but that is just an act
you can’t see through
to hide what i really feel

On the inside
i cry in sorrow 
my sorrows only i will know
my heart is bruised beyond repair 
from all that i have suffered
but you will never know

You look at an xray 
and nothing looks wrong.
but take another look and you will see
how my heart has turned gray.
It’s gray, and bruised, and barely beats
and does not know what’s going on

Im always confused and feel out of place
like i just don’t belong.
I have a few friends that know me through and through,
they are the only things that help. 
but watch me 
and all you will see

Is a normal teenager

Reviews

[angela]

I love the line " you can't see through". A good write.

[Lighthouse Call]

You're not alone.
Very good write!
Some critic =)
Don't worry..
You're writing a message, about what you feel..
Try to explain the backbone of the story though..
Also, good work with the metaphors, such as the x-ray. Try to use more and more =)
Excellent!

[Zeinab]

Wow. This is amazingly written. Nice job.

[ScarlettTheDreamer]

Nice. Smart thinking with the x ray. Good.