Your Own Peace

Perfect peace

serenity dwells within

a lush oasis of the soul

pools of never ending love

tranquil skies of abundant peace

 

perfect are the days

enchanting are the nights

everything is well and so are you

 

to get there is easy

to leave is not so

for once you have gone

nothing remains the same

 

so take the journey deep inside

recognize the beauty

for it is yours, and yours alone!

Reviews

[Dominick]

Good write, I believe inner peace is important and from my perspective easy to leave and not so easy to get there, but that's my own turmoil. I'm not sure why you chose to leave out capitalization or most punctuation, I would think on purpose if it wasn't for the last line containing the sole example of usage. Thanks for sharing.

[Susan M]

Alysia, this is beautiful! It's very evocative and I especially like the first stanza. I can't think of one critical thing to say. It's perfect! :)