FATE OR IS IT?

Pretty as a picture

She looked so divine

Then she came towards me,

Her eyes like sunshine.

Hair flowing golden brown

I knew she had to be mine.

Her bodily curves; soft and round

Placed a sparkle in my eyes

Then she said with warmth "Hello!"

I knew she had to be mine.

Dazzled by her beauty

Hypnotised by her eyes

With curves of maturity

She was just one of a kind

And I knew ...............

Reviews

[Jamestown]

Another well written piece, with a little romantic flare!
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed:)

[andrew mitchell]

Thanks Jamestown for that true love does light up her flare and you take notice! Like a moth around a light globe you do worship till you die or if she flies!!!!

[John Alexander McFadyen]

There is romance in the 'old dog' and not just one of the Chuckle Brothers lol!

[andrew mitchell]

LOL You crack me up John!

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Well my friend, looks like you found your ladie:) A beautiful poem, you really know how to get the readers attention. One hundred points:)

[andrew mitchell]

Thanks IM for your kind words yet again

[Dani The Unreviewed]

You are welcome:)

[Lavender Soya]

This one's cute. I'm sure you've got your inspiration somewhere. Very well penned~ Kudos!

[andrew mitchell]

Hi lavender, thank you and behind every corner there's inspiration. Thanks for dropping in!

[Lavender Soya]

You're welcome. :-)

[nazia]

Fate or not I just hope the girl in this poem in not a fictional creation and you find your one true love. A beautiful write Andrew :)

[andrew mitchell]

Yes `she was as I lay beside her