The Language of LOVE

The Language of LOVE

A Poem by andrew mitchell
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Please read from the base ! lol

"
                                                                                               
                                                                                   zzzzzzzzzzzzz!        
                                                                                                                                                                                                 I love you too                                                                                                                                                                                                                          I love you
                                                                                                                                                                                   
                                                          phew!
                                                 
                                                      sigh!                                                                                                                                                         
                                            love spills                                                                                          
                                              
                                        O's
                                   
                               YES!
                          
                              YES!

                          YES!

                          yes!
                        oooh yeah!
                      oh yes!
                      slap! smack!
                     oh yes!
                    more!
                   oooh!
                  grrr!
                just there!  
               Oh Yes!
              deeper!
             aaaarrr!
            ooh! yeah!  
          thats nice!
        aaaaaaah!
       ooooooh!
 sighs!

               

© 2015 andrew mitchell


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ok so me and my NOT good habits of forgetting to read the notes.. read it the wrong way first and was baffled by the ZZZZZzzzz lol...then i read it how you had instructed and could not stop laughing....yes love was over spilling on this write that is for sure!! Very creative layout too! I really look forward to reading your writes AM !! bravo

Posted 10 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

10 Years Ago

I'm glad you came for the ride!! :):) Thank you TTM and how did you know the bed was layed out!!!
sereenaoutloud

10 Years Ago

lol...shhhhh its LL's secret ..and she never tells!! :))
Lol now that's a new creative way to describe... The subject matter! Impressive... Made me laugh too x)

Posted 10 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

10 Years Ago

Thank you Dina I may do another The language of love continues
The rise and fall... a better story than that of the Roman Empire. Quite the language, Andrew. Nighty night :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

10 Years Ago

lol so right FT
mg...Andrew you make me laugh...not giggle ...LAUGH...
well done:)

Posted 10 Years Ago


andrew mitchell

10 Years Ago

Sometimes I aim to please!! lol
Ha another to brighten the day with belly laughter Andrew

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

andrew mitchell

10 Years Ago

I aim to please John lol lol:) As they say Its not the angle of your dangle or the sag in the bag , .. read more
An intrigue way to design and detail in this verse...yet the lines say it all...gives the reader a different out look on the subject matter...

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

andrew mitchell

10 Years Ago

I thank you for dropping by Glen and observing a different view of between the sheets so to speak. .. read more
Glen Yumang Manese

10 Years Ago

you're welcome...

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andrew mitchell
andrew mitchell

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