All is still

His heart heavy

Against cold wind.

Covered in ice,

Frozen within.

His heart....... hibernates

'Til next spring.

Reviews

[sereenaoutloud]

Too much emotions to take his heart needs a little break! lol
No seriously this is fantastic so few word but they create such a clear picture and it is so heartfelt!!

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you sereena for your kind words and your happy go lucky manner!!:)

[B]

Hmmm his heart speaks out and sings

Very charming poem

I feel the air of seasons stroking your words

[andrew mitchell]

seasons and emotions make a nice pair. Thank you my friend!

[alf]

hi Andrew. This is raw emotion!!! I love the way you leave the door open for hope to creep in . . . at some future time!!!! This is heartfelt, I think, and so packed with emotion. A brilliant write!!!! alf

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you alf It was no more about winter than it was about a broken heart but open to both lol

[alf]

So . . . ???????????????

[andrew mitchell]

Heavy the Heart!!! lol

[alf]

UUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU-huh!!!!!!!!!

[andrew mitchell]

lol .................

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Tough my man it's our turn up here for some sun!
Nice depiction of the onset of winter.

[andrew mitchell]

I've never seen rain pour so so heavy in the last 24hrs

[John Alexander McFadyen]

You call us whinging Pommies! when you get drought you complain and when,you get rain you complain!

[andrew mitchell]

I love rain,Autumn, Winter and Spring . Summer is too hot in Adelaide up to 45C and days of mid 40's that's when I whinge! lol I love watching rain and the sea!