bleeds

As a heart is broken

That continues to bleed

The comeback...remarkable

When the heart....

                       still believes.

Reviews

[Kelly Scheppers]

You gave us that impact towards the end...good effect, Andrew!

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you Kelly I owe you a few impacts by your great writes:)

[sereenaoutloud]

wow andrew one of my favs ..this is so beautiful and full of hope!
(note i called you andrew...think its the first time..lol)

[andrew mitchell]

You called me Andrew lol!!!!!!! glad you enjoyed :):)

[sereenaoutloud]

I know right...shock shock.. and i didn't whisper it either ..heheh

[Cory Barrett]

Andrew, good juju here....

[andrew mitchell]

Thanks Cory for dropping in! Howdy!

[....................]

A beautiful write, Andrew, with so much hope. Well-done... Welcome to the brevity club!

[andrew mitchell]

Thank you Mr President of Brevity

[....................]

:) does that make you the A*s Pres? I mean assistant president?

[andrew mitchell]

No I think maybe moonskittles is your charming assistant

[....................]

well, charming she is and I would have to share presidency with her :)

[andrew mitchell]

I know imagine the writes in combo FT Skittles- Moonsgrew!

[....................]

hahahahahaha.... can't wait until she sees this.... lol

[~]

ohhh my!!! laughing all my skittles off!!! incorrigible!!!

[....................]

hahahahahahahahahahaha..............................

[~]

but andrew, you forgot my other shapes of mooning, it does not only grow, it also gets smaller :D

[....................]

oh, look, all the skittles are off... and there, behold... the NAKED MOON!!!!!!!

[~]

yes indeed FT, matching the A*s Pres position well :D

[....................]

hahahaha... roaring with laughter.... lol....

[~]

i'll blame it on the sugar high :D

[....................]

yeah.... right.... it was the sugar.... yeah, sure :)

[andrew mitchell]

And so it was rewritten from this day forward that it was never a man in the moon but a woman and that explains why it is so tidy up there!! The Naked Moon on sugar high!!

[....................]

a wonderful conclusion Andrew

[~]

Amen!!!! St. Andrew of the Mitchells :D

[andrew mitchell]

hahaha oh what fun!

[....................]

The highlight of my night... thanks one and all for the banter... I feel inspired to write.... :)

[~]

yay!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! go! go!

[andrew mitchell]

See you both FT Skittles-Moonsgrew! :)

[....................]

:) ok, I am going, going...

[alf]

Hi Andrew. Yeeeeesssss??????????? Love the new inspiration. I have no moon outside tonight . . . I wonder . . . You are fast catching Mr Brevity here!!! alf

[andrew mitchell]

Its the sound of gorgeous rain here my friend with a fire going lol

[alf]

OOOOOOOHHHHHHHHHHH. I am green!!!!!!!!!!!!! it's the one thing I miss from the old place!!!

[andrew mitchell]

Goodnight alf its late and thanks!:)

[alf]

Night, Andrew

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Definitely one I can relate to. A truism that if we still hold on to belief we can weather the storms life throws our way.

[andrew mitchell]

Yes trials and trials for miles and miles and then....... sunshine!!